tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-370794131462210272.post4504921097274076608..comments2011-09-22T00:45:40.781-04:00Comments on If Not Now...When?: Chapter FourteenHockeyFireChickhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16091285029672917458noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-370794131462210272.post-13914070265008274612011-08-20T15:04:39.896-04:002011-08-20T15:04:39.896-04:00I read the last chapter but my comment got all won...I read the last chapter but my comment got all wonky and disappeard... so know that I loved it!<br />And this one...<br /><br />THEY HAD SEX!!!<br />Yes!<br /><br />I love that he surprised her! That's so cute*<br /><br />"I’m fairly sure the small amount of blood that had still pumping through my heart was now filtering down to my dick." -- I. Loved. That. Sentence.<br /><br />I would very much appreciate evil. quiet laughs from him* ;)<br /><br />“I was having a relaxing time just playing with your hair and listening to your snore.” -- Awwwwwww!! That is so adorable.<br /><br />Mmmaawwwww, she called him her ray of sunshine. Stop writing things that make me smile like a fool*<br /><br />And finally... OH MY GOD HER LEG MOVED, YES!! I know it's still a long way to go, but... YES!!!<br /><br /><br />p.s. PICTURE! :)Rebel Hearthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03986619279683083552noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-370794131462210272.post-90984025706837795352011-08-19T20:49:09.541-04:002011-08-19T20:49:09.541-04:00I love how considerate he is of her.
I for one don...I love how considerate he is of her.<br />I for one don't want her to see the picture yet. I don't think she is ready to see it.<br />Her leg moving is good things to come.......I hope! :-)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-370794131462210272.post-69415037755728175762011-08-19T17:10:54.427-04:002011-08-19T17:10:54.427-04:00Bring on the torture! We know it's coming soon...Bring on the torture! We know it's coming soon, but I'm glad to see them get all cute together :)Maegenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13411969884152587442noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-370794131462210272.post-2493985111254005392011-08-19T15:03:01.409-04:002011-08-19T15:03:01.409-04:00I am so in love with this story. This update is ab...I am so in love with this story. This update is absolutely one of my favorites. Your writing is brilliant and creative.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-370794131462210272.post-26239874489584872362011-08-19T14:51:03.429-04:002011-08-19T14:51:03.429-04:00That was very sweet chapter! And yippee, her leg m...That was very sweet chapter! And yippee, her leg moved....but alas this is going too smooth for one of your stories, my dear! We know you and you love to torture small animals and us! ;o)TEPHYWASHEREhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17050323552708954480noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-370794131462210272.post-52838561278017649282011-08-19T10:28:04.401-04:002011-08-19T10:28:04.401-04:00*Sigh* That's exactly how I was hoping it wou...*Sigh* That's exactly how I was hoping it would be. You wrote that beautifully! He's falling in love with her, sex and her leg moved -- I'd say that was a jam packed chapter!! Loved it!daroxygirlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04172832702440073890noreply@blogger.com